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* Started work on changing Getting Started as well. * Made screenshots responsive. * Stub for Apple Pi Baker
Fixed feedback items from @WasabiFan
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Although it may be a more accurate expression of your inner feelings, "this instructions were written" is not a well-formed phrase 😉
Also cleaned up more typos and such.
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"help thing out" -> ...I'm not sure
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I just finished a pass through the diff to give some initial feedback -- it looks like you got the first section of it already. Feel free to call upon me if you have any other changes you'd like another pair of eyes on. P.S. Sorry to anyone who's watching this repo -- I imagine your inbox is 30 messages larger now 😉 |
* Updated bluetooth and tethering tutorials. * Removed some byte order marks * Cropped OS X screenshots * Use sudo since we aren't root by default anymore * Changed default password to "maker" everywhere * Incorporate some more feedback
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ready for round 2. |
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I suppose that's my cue 😉 |
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I have left feedback on the new commit directly. Looks good overall, mostly semantic suggestions this time -- just one or two typos. |
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By the way, I'd recommend that you take a few minutes to review the available css features of Bootstrap -- there might be some nice potential improvements here. But it's not very important. |
This is far from done but I'm pushing to github to backup my work. If anyone wants to review for typos and such, be my guest.