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 # EOMONTH (Transact-SQL)
 [!INCLUDE[tsql-appliesto-ss2012-all-md](../../includes/tsql-appliesto-ss2012-all-md.md)]
 
-  Returns the last day of the month that contains the specified date, with an optional offset.  
+This function returns the last day of the month containing a specified date, with an optional offset.  
   
  ![Topic link icon](../../database-engine/configure-windows/media/topic-link.gif "Topic link icon") [Transact-SQL Syntax Conventions](../../t-sql/language-elements/transact-sql-syntax-conventions-transact-sql.md)  
   
@@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ EOMONTH ( start_date [, month_to_add ] )
 ```  
   
 ## Arguments  
- *start_date*  
- Date expression specifying the date for which to return the last day of the month.  
+*start_date*  
+A date expression that specifies the date for which to return the last day of the month.  
   
- *month_to_add*  
- Optional integer expression specifying the number of months to add to *start_date*.  
+*month_to_add*  
+An optional integer expression that specifies the number of months to add to *start_date*.  
   
- If this argument is specified, then **EOMONTH** adds the specified number of months to *start_date*, and then returns the last day of the month for the resulting date. If this addition overflows the valid range of dates, then an error is raised.  
+If the *month_to_add* argument has a value, then `EOMONTH` adds the specified number of months to *start_date*, and then returns the last day of the month for the resulting date. If this addition overflows the valid range of dates, then `EOMONTH` will raise an error.  
   
 ## Return Type  
  **date**  
   
 ## Remarks  
- This function can be remoted to [!INCLUDE[ssSQL11](../../includes/sssql11-md.md)] servers and higher. It cannot be remoted to servers with a version lower than [!INCLUDE[ssSQL11](../../includes/sssql11-md.md)].  
+The `EOMONTH` function can remote to [!INCLUDE[ssSQL11](../../includes/sssql11-md.md)] servers and higher. It cannot be remote to servers with a version lower than [!INCLUDE[ssSQL11](../../includes/sssql11-md.md)].  
   
 ## Examples  
   
@@ -61,8 +61,7 @@ DECLARE @date DATETIME = '12/1/2011';
 SELECT EOMONTH ( @date ) AS Result;  
 GO  
 ```  
-  
- [!INCLUDE[ssResult](../../includes/ssresult-md.md)]  
+[!INCLUDE[ssResult](../../includes/ssresult-md.md)]  
   
 ```  
 Result  
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@ Result
   
 (1 row(s) affected)  
 ```  
-  
+
 ### B. EOMONTH with string parameter and implicit conversion  
   
 ```  
@@ -92,6 +91,15 @@ Result
   
 ### C. EOMONTH with and without the month_to_add parameter  
   
+Note:   the values shown in these result sets reflect an
+        execution date between and including
+        
+        12/01/2011
+        
+        and
+        
+        12/31/2011
+
 ```sql  
 DECLARE @date DATETIME = GETDATE();  
 SELECT EOMONTH ( @date ) AS 'This Month';  
