remove earlier rewrite note in odata-dd-1; condense intro in odata-dd-6

qmacro · qmacro · commit 3f58f36964f5 · 2026-02-25T14:15:09.000Z
diff --git a/tutorials/odata-dd-1-origins/odata-dd-1-origins.md b/tutorials/odata-dd-1-origins/odata-dd-1-origins.md
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 ## Intro
 
-*This series of tutorials on OData is to replace the original "Take a Deep Dive into OData" which you may already know, and which we're now retiring. We're building out the content of this new series in the open, as a work in progress, and would love to hear your feedback, what you would like to see and what you think of the content as we create it. As you can see, it's very early days. Please let us know your thoughts on this new mission [via this issue link](https://github.com/sap-tutorials/Tutorials/issues/new?title=Early%20feedback%20on%20the%20new%20OData%20mission&body=Let%20us%20know%20your%20thoughts%20on%20this%20new%20series%20-%20what%20you%20like,%20dislike,%20would%20like%20to%20see.%20Thank%20you!).*
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 OData is an open standard that is both a data format and a protocol for consuming and manipulating data in a uniform way. It's ISO/IEC approved and managed by the [OASIS organization](https://www.oasis-open.org/).
 
 OData has its origins in the world of weblogs and syndication, but now serves to power a great deal of the API and integration activities in typical SAP enterprise environments. This tutorial will help you understand OData's origins.
diff --git a/tutorials/odata-dd-6-annotations/odata-dd-6-annotations.md b/tutorials/odata-dd-6-annotations/odata-dd-6-annotations.md
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 ## Intro
 
-In all cases, annotations consist of two parts:
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-- the annotation term
-- the annotation value
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-In this tutorial we'll examine the terms, along with their types and possible values, in our [Northbreeze OData metadata document](https://odd.cfapps.eu10.hana.ondemand.com/northbreeze/$metadata).
+In all cases, annotations consist of two parts - the term and the value. In this tutorial we'll examine the terms, along with their types and possible values, in our [Northbreeze OData metadata document](https://odd.cfapps.eu10.hana.ondemand.com/northbreeze/$metadata).
 
 > This tutorial belongs to the OData Deep Dive mission, a re-write of the original. The re-write is a work in progess, please proceed with caution! More info can be found in the blog post [OData Deep Dive rewrite in the open](https://qmacro.org/blog/posts/2026/02/02/odata-deep-dive-rewrite-in-the-open/).
 
