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MikeRayMSFT · MikeRayMSFT · commit e7031f934f41 · 2022-08-23T17:12:08.000-07:00
diff --git a/docs/sql-server/sql-server-2022-release-notes.md b/docs/sql-server/sql-server-2022-release-notes.md
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@ This section identifies known issues you may experience with this product:
 
 - If you choose to add the Azure extension for SQL Server to an existing instance, Setup currently requires that you also add at least 1 other feature from the **Feature Selection** page in order to complete adding the Arc extension feature.
 
-- When you install Azure extension for SQL Server during setup, in some cases a timeout may occur and the you might see a timeout exception but setup should succeed and the extension should be installed.
+- When you install Azure extension for SQL Server during setup, in some cases a timeout may occur. In this case, setup returns a timeout exception but setup should succeed and the extension should be installed.
 
-- When you set encryption to **Force Encryption** with SQL Server Configuration Manager, the setting will not change the encryption and may cause errors.
+- When you set encryption to **Force Encryption** with SQL Server Configuration Manager, the setting won't change the encryption and may cause errors.
 
-- Query Store for secondary replicas is available for preview. It is not available for use in production environments.
+- Query Store for secondary replicas is available for preview. It isn't available for use in production environments.
 
-- Certain SSIS functions require the [Microsoft ODBC Driver 18 for SQL Server](../connect/odbc/download-odbc-driver-for-sql-server.md) and [Microsoft OLE DB Driver 19 for SQL Server](../connect/oledb/download-oledb-driver-for-sql-server.md), which are not packaged in SQL Server 2022 RC 0 installation. For RC 0, please install the two drivers from the provided links as necessary.
+- Certain SSIS functions require the [Microsoft ODBC Driver 18 for SQL Server](../connect/odbc/download-odbc-driver-for-sql-server.md) and [Microsoft OLE DB Driver 19 for SQL Server](../connect/oledb/download-oledb-driver-for-sql-server.md), which aren't packaged in SQL Server 2022 RC 0 installation. For RC 0, install the two drivers from the provided links as necessary.
 
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