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arvindshmicrosoft · MashaMSFT · web-flow · commit 1e6cc24b91c7 · 2023-06-07T14:49:04.000-07:00
Co-authored-by: Masha Thomas (MSFT) &lt;32783170+MashaMSFT@users.noreply.github.com&gt;
diff --git a/azure-sql/azure-sql-iaas-vs-paas-what-is-overview.md b/azure-sql/azure-sql-iaas-vs-paas-what-is-overview.md
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Azure SQL Database offers the following deployment options:
   - An [*elastic pool*](database/elastic-pool-overview.md), which is a collection of databases with a shared set of resources managed via a [logical server](database/logical-servers.md). Single databases can be moved into and out of an elastic pool. This option is optimized for modern application development of new cloud-born applications using the multi-tenant SaaS application pattern. Elastic pools provide a cost-effective solution for managing the performance of multiple databases that have variable usage patterns.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> [Elastic pools for Hyperscale](database/hyperscale-elastic-pool-overview.md) is currently in preview.
+> [Elastic pools for Hyperscale](database/hyperscale-elastic-pool-overview.md) are currently in preview.
 
 ### Azure SQL Managed Instance
 
diff --git a/azure-sql/database/hyperscale-elastic-pool-overview.md b/azure-sql/database/hyperscale-elastic-pool-overview.md
@@ -13,9 +13,11 @@ ms.custom:
 # Hyperscale elastic pools overview in Azure SQL Database
 [!INCLUDE[appliesto-sqldb](../includes/appliesto-sqldb.md)]
 
-An Azure SQL Database [elastic pool](./elastic-pool-overview.md) enables software as a service (SaaS) developers to optimize the price performance ratio for a group of databases, within a prescribed budget, while delivering performance elasticity for each database. Azure SQL Database Hyperscale elastic pools ("Hyperscale elastic pools") introduces a shared resource model for Hyperscale databases. 
+This article provides an overview of Hyperscale elastic pools in Azure SQL Database. 
 
-This article provides an overview of Hyperscale elastic pools in Azure SQL Database. For examples to create, scale, or move databases into a Hyperscale elastic pool by using the Azure CLI or PowerShell, review [Working with Hyperscale elastic pools using command-line tools](./hyperscale-elastic-pool-command-line.md)
+An Azure SQL Database [elastic pool](./elastic-pool-overview.md) enables software as a service (SaaS) developers to optimize the price performance ratio for a group of databases within a prescribed budget, while delivering performance elasticity for each database. Azure SQL Database Hyperscale elastic pools introduces a shared resource model for Hyperscale databases. 
+
+For examples to create, scale, or move databases into a Hyperscale elastic pool by using the Azure CLI or PowerShell, review [Working with Hyperscale elastic pools using command-line tools](./hyperscale-elastic-pool-command-line.md)
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > [Elastic pools for Hyperscale](./hyperscale-elastic-pool-overview.md) are currently in preview.
