small changes per reviewer and mike

v-thepet · v-thepet · commit a77e1a9e71f7 · 2017-12-06T11:30:26.000-08:00
diff --git a/docs/linux/sql-server-linux-deploy-pacemaker-cluster.md b/docs/linux/sql-server-linux-deploy-pacemaker-cluster.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
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 title: Deploy a Pacemaker cluster for SQL Server on Linux | Microsoft Docs
-description: 
+description: How to configure SQL Server and Pacemaker to deploy availability groups and failover cluster instances on Linux. 
 author: MikeRayMSFT 
 ms.author: mikeray 
 manager: jhubbard
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Use the syntax below to install the packages that make up the high availability
     
     ```bash
     sudo subscription-manager list --available
-3.  Run the following command to associate RHEL high availability with the subscription.
+3.  Run the following command to associate RHEL high availability with the subscription
     
     ```bash
     sudo subscription-manager attach --pool=<PoolID>
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ This section documents how to create and configure the cluster for each distribu
 
 **RHEL**
 
-1. Authorize the nodes.
+1. Authorize the nodes
    
    ```bash
    sudo pcs cluster auth <Node1 Node2 … NodeN> -u hacluster
diff --git a/docs/linux/sql-server-linux-ha-basics.md b/docs/linux/sql-server-linux-ha-basics.md
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ sudo firewall-cmd --permanent --add-service=high-availability
 -   [SLES](https://www.suse.com/documentation/sle-ha-12/singlehtml/book_sleha/book_sleha.html)
 
 ### Install [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] packages for availability
-On a Windows-based [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] installation, some components are installed even in a basic engine install, while others are not. Under Linux, only the [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] engine is installed as part of the installation process. Everything else is optional. For highly available [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] instances under Linux, two packages should be installed at the same time as [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]: [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent (*mssql-server-agent*) and the high availability (HA) package (*mssql-server-ha*). While [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent is technically optional, it is [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]’s scheduler for jobs and is required by log shipping, so installation is recommended. On Windows-based installations, [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent is not optional.
+On a Windows-based [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] installation, some components are installed even in a basic engine install, while others are not. Under Linux, only the [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] engine is installed as part of the installation process. Everything else is optional. For highly available [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] instances under Linux, two packages should be installed with [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]: [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent (*mssql-server-agent*) and the high availability (HA) package (*mssql-server-ha*). While [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent is technically optional, it is [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]’s scheduler for jobs and is required by log shipping, so installation is recommended. On Windows-based installations, [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent is not optional.
 
 >[!NOTE]
 >For those new to [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)], [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent is [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)]’s built-in job scheduler. It is a common way for DBAs to schedule things like backups and other [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] maintenance. Unlike a Windows-based installation of [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] where [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent is a completely different service, on Linux, [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] Agent runs in context of [!INCLUDE[ssnoversion-md](../includes/ssnoversion-md.md)] itself.
