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 Dear <%= @donator.first_name.capitalize %>, <br />
-<p>Thanks to you, our Soldier, Sailor, Marine, Air Force, and Coast Guard veterans will no longer be left behind in the digital age. Your donation of $<%= @donator.amount %> will help a veteran get coding today, the new literacy of the 21st century.</p>
+<p>Thanks to you, a Soldier, Sailor, Marine, Air Force, and Coast Guard veteran will no longer be left behind in the digital age. Your donation of $<%= @donator.amount %> will help a veteran get coding today, the new literacy of the 21st century.</p>
 
-<p>Thanks to your generous contribution, Operation Code can continue to expand and serve more veterans across the United States in their learning to code through scholarships, software mentorship, and employer services and help fill the nation's technical talent shortage with America's patriots who's served their country.</p>
+<p>Thanks to your generous contribution, Operation Code can continue to expand and serve more veterans across the United States in their learning to code through scholarships, software mentorship, and employer services and help fill the nation's technical talent shortage with American patriots who've served their country.</p>
 
 <p>Thanks to you, we are continuing to provide over 250 veterans just this year with an online, safe learning community to learn about different prrogramming languages, ask questions related to their web/mobile application projects, and get personalized software mentorship from volunteer software developers in the industry. Today, you joined us in making modern software development education accessible to all who've served.</p>