@@ -51,8 +51,6 @@ delete talks, and comment on existing talks. Whenever the user makes
5151such a change, the client makes an ((HTTP)) ((request)) to tell the
5252server about it.
5353
54- FIXME: update the screenshot
55-
5654{{figure {url: "img/skillsharing.png", alt: "Screenshot of the skill-sharing website",width: "10cm"}}}
5755
5856{{index "live view", "user experience", "pushing data", connection}}
@@ -100,12 +98,12 @@ answer when it has nothing new to report.
10098
10199As long as the client makes sure it constantly has a polling request
102100open, it will receive information from the server quickly after it
103- becomes available. For example, if Alice has our skill-sharing
101+ becomes available. For example, if Fatma has our skill-sharing
104102application open in her browser, that browser will have made a request
105- for updates and be waiting for a response to that request. When Bob
103+ for updates and be waiting for a response to that request. When Iman
106104submits a talk on Extreme Downhill Unicycling, the server will notice
107- that Alice is waiting for updates and send information about the new
108- talk as a response to her pending request. Alice 's browser will
105+ that Fatma is waiting for updates and send information about the new
106+ talk as a response to her pending request. Fatma 's browser will
109107receive the data and update the screen to show the talk.
110108
111109{{index robustness, timeout}}
@@ -148,7 +146,7 @@ A `GET` request to `/talks` returns a JSON document like this:
148146
149147``` {lang: "application/json"}
150148[{"title": "Unituning",
151- "presenter": "Carlos ",
149+ "presenter": "Jamal ",
152150 "summary": "Modifying your cycle for extra style",
153151 "comment": []}]}
154152```
@@ -179,7 +177,7 @@ PUT /talks/How%20to%20Idle HTTP/1.1
179177Content-Type: application/json
180178Content-Length: 92
181179
182- {"presenter": "Dana ",
180+ {"presenter": "Maureen ",
183181 "summary": "Standing still on a unicycle"}
184182```
185183
@@ -197,7 +195,7 @@ POST /talks/Unituning/comments HTTP/1.1
197195Content-Type: application/json
198196Content-Length: 72
199197
200- {"author": "Alice ",
198+ {"author": "Iman ",
201199 "message": "Will you talk about raising a cycle?"}
202200```
203201
@@ -882,7 +880,7 @@ function renderTalkForm(dispatch) {
882880 summary: summary.value});
883881 event.target.reset();
884882 }
885- }, elt("h3", null, "Submit a talk "),
883+ }, elt("h3", null, "Submit a Talk "),
886884 elt("label", null, "Title: ", title),
887885 elt("label", null, "Summary: ", summary),
888886 elt("button", {type: "submit"}, "Submit"));
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