Updated README.md (OpenFeign#670)

SCrusader · velo · commit 47b7aa24e462 · 2018-03-31T10:37:19.000+13:00
Made "Why Feign and not X" and "How does Feign work" more formal and concise.
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ Feign is a Java to HTTP client binder inspired by [Retrofit](https://github.com/
 
 ### Why Feign and not X?
 
-You can use tools like Jersey and CXF to write java clients for ReST or SOAP services.  You can write your own code on top of http transport libraries like Apache HC.  Feign aims to connect your code to http apis with minimal overhead and code. Via customizable decoders and error handling, you should be able to write to any text-based http api.
+Feign uses tools like Jersey and CXF to write java clients for ReST or SOAP services. Furthermore, Feign allows you to write your own code on top of http libraries such as Apache HC. Feign connects your code to http APIs with minimal overhead and code via customizable decoders and error handling, which can be written to any text-based http API.
 
 ### How does Feign work?
 
-Feign works by processing annotations into a templatized request.  Just before sending it off, arguments are applied to these templates in a straightforward fashion.  While this limits Feign to only supporting text-based apis, it dramatically simplified system aspects such as replaying requests.  It is also stupid easy to unit test your conversions knowing this.
+Feign works by processing annotations into a templatized request. Arguments are applied to these templates in a straightforward fashion before output.  Although Feign is limited to supporting text-based APIs, it dramatically simplifies system aspects such as replaying requests. Furthermore, Feign makes it easy to unit test your conversions knowing this.
 
 ### Basics
 
