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shiftbot · shiftbot · commit 4d628e5fc61a · 2012-03-20T20:52:29.000+11:00
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@@ -11,24 +11,23 @@ With all the work that the Code52 team and its band of merry contributors have a
 
 ### You might have missed...
 
-While @tobin and @aeoth were working to get the Enhance project started, there has been a supreme effort during the week to address some outstanding work:
+While [@tobin](http://twitter.com/tobin) and [@aeoth](http://twitter.com/aeoth) were working to get the Enhance project started, there has been a supreme effort behind the scenes during the week to address some outstanding work:
 
  - **[Pretzel](http://code52.org/pretzel/)** added support for using Razor templates alongside Liquid templates, and has a [Chocolately package](http://chocolatey.org/packages/pretzel) available for people to install on their local machines.
 
- - **[Ideastrike](http://code52.org/ideastrike/)** has been updated to use Nancy v0.10 - with that transition completed we are looking to enhance and expand on what we initially released.
+ - **[Ideastrike](http://code52.org/ideastrike/)** has been updated to use Nancy v0.10 - with that transition completed we are looking to enhance and expand on what we initially released to the world.
 
- - **[ASP.NET Internationalization](http://code52.org/aspnet-internationalization)** packages were shipped on NuGet during the week.
+ - **[ASP.NET Internationalization](http://code52.org/aspnet-internationalization)** packages were shipped on NuGet.
 
-
-## What are your plans?
+## What about this week?
 
 We're aware of the initial premise we made about "a new coding project every week" and how a pause goes against it, but we don't want to march onwards to the detriment of the previous good work we've acheived.
 
 We plan on taking a break from the insanity that is a new project each week to polish previous projects. We would much rather 40 *maintained* and *complete* projects than 52 incomplete projects that never reach their full potential.
 
-As such, we are calling a working bee - there's many things to do, and we want to get as much of them done now before we continue on with new stuff.
+As such, we are calling a working bee - there's many things to do, and we want to get as much of it done now before we continue on with new stuff.
 
-As [@shiftkey](http://twitter.com/shiftkey) will be over in Auckland for Codemania next week (grab him if you want to talk about Code52 or if you just like beer), we will kick off a new project once he returns on **April 2nd**.
+As [@shiftkey](http://twitter.com/shiftkey) will be over in Auckland for Codemania next week (grab him if you want to talk about Code52 or if you just like beer too), we will kick off a new project once he returns on **April 2nd**.
 
 ## Working Bee
 
@@ -46,13 +45,13 @@ Another "fun with installers" case we need to address is how Office requires a s
 
 Each of the Code52 projects has a [gh-pages](http://pages.github.com/) branch - to introduce users to the application or library - and a wiki - to capture documentation and details to help with understanding of the project. 
 
-The project page template (from the work with MarkPad and ASP.NET Internationalization) has been spun off into a [separate repository](https://github.com/Code52/gh-pages-template) for people to explore and contribtute to.
+The project page template (from the work done on MarkPad and ASP.NET i18n) has been spun off into a [separate repository](https://github.com/Code52/gh-pages-template) for people to contribtute to - ideas we have thrown around include different stylesheets and templates, but this has not evolved due to the initial goal of having consistent project pages for each Code52 project.
 
-Some of our library projects - Pretzel and ASP.NET Internationalization in particular - require refreshing or writing new documentation to help users get familiar with certain features of each application.
+Some of our library projects - Pretzel and ASP.NET i18n in particular - require refreshing existing documentation or new documentation to help users get familiar with certain features of each application. We want to ensure that details like documentation, which may be overlooked when a project starts, are not left behind as things grow.
 
 ### Miscellaneous awesomeness
 
-A quick list off the top of our heads of the other things we are looking to knock off this week:
+A quick list off the top of our heads of the other things we are looking to knock off:
 
  - Even after [reworking the UI](http://code52.org/weekone-dayseventyseven.html) for Markpad, new ideas and suggestions for features are still coming in, including split-view/multi-monitor support, Github-flavoured Markdown, exporting to different formats and even document recovery.
 
